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Precise Edit editors keep a [link widoczny dla zalogowanych] eye out because these perplexing and confusing words. We reckon their use and,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], in most cases, ascertain a way to alter the sentences so as to shirk them. The outcome is stronger writing that extra apparently and extra professionally communicates the author's ideas.?
9. Just: "Some people are just persnickety about writing. It's just the way they write."
Reason: The word "just" doesn't add whichever real value to these sentences. Leaving them out results in the same meanings and makes the sentences many tighter and more direct: "Some people are persnickety about writing. It's the way they write." Doesn't that just sound better?
10 Words to Avoid When Writing
Writing is a composition of masterpiece and craft. The art comes from lots of reading,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], talking, cerebral, imagining, and writing. The craft is primarily technique. Some techniques are complicated, but a few are very uncomplicated and will immediately reinforce your writing. In many cases, whatsoever, strengthening writing simply means avoiding those entities that weaken it.?
1. Really: "Avoiding this word is a really great motif."?
Reason: A really great idea is the same as a great idea. If you need to punctuate something, such as the "greatness" of an idea, use a single word that means what you are trying to say, e.g., "Avoiding this word is an eminent idea."
5. As: "As you write this word, poke out your eyes. It's feeble as it tin cause chaos."
Reason: A person usually cannot do two actions simultaneously, so "as" doesn't make sense in the premier sentence. It could be rewritten, "Write this word, then poke out your eyes." In the second sentence, the writer should use "because." Until reading the rest of the sentence, the reader doesn't understand if "as" means two actions are occurring simultaneously or means ��because.��
6. A lot: "A lot of manuscript could be made better."
Reason: How much is "a lot"? 100 documents? 50% of anything I have written? 1% of one million paperbacks? The term "a lot" is insignificant without the context, but whether you give the context, you don't absence the term "a lot." Also, this is extremely subjective. "A lot" to one human may appear like "some" to another.
3. Feel: "I feel the government should stop people from writing poorly."
Reason: Which emotion is being "felt"? What is the writer touching and, therefore,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], consciousness? Usually, the writer method "deem" or "think." "Feel" is also used along authors to describe a character's emotions,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], for in "He felt despondent." Instead, the writer should show the emotions via the character's words and deeds.
8. Like: "Using these words is like baking with spoiled milk."
Reason: If this is like someone, then it is NOT that thing. Giving exact descriptions and using correct verbs will dwindle your need to use "like," e.g., "These words spoil your writing." A good metaphor can promote your writing, but using too many makes writing humdrum, so try to think of a assorted way to express your ideas.
2. You: "Sometimes, you feel like writing is too hard."
Reason: I never feel this way, so this statement is not true. The writer probably means "I" or "some writers," e.g., "Sometimes, I feel like writing is too hard." "You" should only be used when you are really writing to, and about, the reader, not when production general statements.
7. Sort of/Kind of: "Using these words is sort of annoying to the reader."
Reason: If using these words is merely sort of annoying, you haven't told the reader accurate what it is. If it is annoying, mention so: "Writing this course annoys the reader." If it is not annoying, narrate the reader exactly what it is, e.g., "Using these words bothers readers." Use words namely average what you are attempting to say, and give the reader exact descriptions. This too applies to "variety of."
We have identified 10 words that nearly always weaken writing. In no particular order, they are consist in ....
The sample sentences demonstrate needy uses of these words, but you ambition find nice uses, too. In fact, some of them are peerless fine in some contexts or when used of special note ways. Your level of formality, intention,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], voice,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], and crowd will resolve whether or not to use these words. If you're not sure whether or not to use them in a particular sentence, our counsel is to avoid them.??
4. Think: "I consider the administration should stop human from writing poorly."
Reason: If you write one opinion, the reader understands that you also think it. Just say what it is you think, e.g., "The government should stop people from writing poorly."
10. Used to: "He accustomed to write like this while he began writing."
Reason: Using fewer words to express an idea is virtually always a good idea,[link widoczny dla zalogowanych],[link widoczny dla zalogowanych], so "used to write" can be written "wrote," as in, "He wrote like this when he started writing." The problem is that "used to write" and "when he started writing" both express events in the elapse, which is redundant. In almost each case, "used?? to . . ." can be replaced with a elapse tense verb.?


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