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unter ?lches a buck
from Shirley’s stash in the dispatch of?ce. Why? God’s
sakeSandy would NEVERdo anything like this [link widoczny dla zalogowanych]!
I also
mark the page in the manuscript with a bigsymbol
meaning that cuts and/or changes are needed on this page
and reminding myself to check my notes for the exact details
if I don’t remember them.
I love this part of the process (wellI love
allthe parts of
the processbut this one is especially nice) because I’m redis-
covering my own bookand usually liking it. That changes.
By the time a book is actually in printI’ve been over it a
dozen times or morecan quote whole passagesand only
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OnWriting
wish the damned old smelly thing would go away. That’s
laterthough; the ?rst read-through is usually pretty ?ne.
During that readingthe top part of my mind is concen-
trating on story and toolbox concerns: knocking out pro-
nouns with unclear antecedents (I hate and mistrust
pronounsevery one of them as slippery as a ?y-by-night per-
sonal-injury lawyer)adding clarifying phrases where they
seem necessaryand of coursedeleting all the adverbs I can
bear to part with (never all of them; never enough).
UnderneathhoweverI’m asking myself the Big Queyilai:
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